There are many Ekphrastic poems, almost every poet has written at least one. This poem is mine. It is in response to Edward Hopper's Office at Night 1940. I Recommend reading the poem then looking at the painting. Hopper is well known for his colors, the mysterious nature of his subjects, and the reality of his situations. Look at more of his paintings, or any work of art really, and see what starts bouncing in your head. Then write it down.
Carla and Kolchek
It is dark out, past suppertime, and Carla cannot remember
where she left her cherry lipstick.
She wore her blue-grey dress for her now missed date
with the man who would not become her husband.
They should have left four hours ago but
Mr. Kolchek was behind again. Failing
in an almost professional way that seemed natural
like a blessed ignorance of what was expected of him.
He chose this carpet of grass for just these occasions.
Carla knew that. She knew that Mr. Kolchek kept her
late for not so gentlemanly reasons. She knew he would not act
first so she steadily brightened her lips
to, maybe, force his hand. He dreamed of laying her down
in the field between their desks and kissing away that horrid
color from her thoughtful lips. He would never do this
it was not in him to do things well. Mr. Kolchek could feel Carla
thinking and it took all of his control to not stand up and yell
“Let’s get the hell out of here. We can go drink and dance.
We can eat at Minny’s or Salvatore’s and fall home together.”
Never. He would just continue to look busy and Carla
would get the work done. This is why they could not find one another
they needed the other to be crushed under tiny hopes,
sliced within but still enclosed like a ruptured artery
within a show quality heart.
This would go on until they retired to opposite coasts
or died or found anyone they could fool into marriage.
Carla’s lipstick was in Mr. Kolchek’s left breast pocket.
Wow. What a creative response to a work of art. I do not have this ability! I looked at the painting and your poem is a great interpretation. (Perhaps you could use this link for readers to go to the picture from your blog: http://www.artsconnected.org/resource/90944/office-at-night
ReplyDeletePutting your story behind the painting made it much more interesting to me.